Conrad Rice

Alrighty, Cal. I'm here for the critique of part 2. Dylan had no reservations about turning on the siren as she ran every, red light, turning what was usually close ...

Hi Ky, So, I see that you went with the dual book approach. I have to say that seems like the best way to do this. Now you can start ...

Hello Cal. I'll be your critiquer for today. Yay! So, you wanted specific comments on your tense and how it flowed. As far as I could tell, your flow went ...

Okay, Jared, I'm here for a review of part 3. This is a Catholic church, right? So, how come the priest has a wife? Priests in Catholic churches take vows ...

Well, hi Jared! I can only hope I will be as helpful to you as you were to me. So, now we get a little more into Joseph's mind. I ...

Hi Jared! So, you are wondering about your description. Well, first off, where are they? I know that they're in an execution chamber, but you never describe it as such. ...

Hi Ky! I come again to critique this very interesting story. Let's get down to it. It's like God has taken a penny to the scratch-it lotto card of the ...

Hi Ky! :) Bet you didn't think you'd see me comment on a poem, ever. I'm hurting for reviews though, and I'm going with works by people I know. Okay, ...

Hi, Penguin. Saw that no one else had critiqued this story yet, so I thought I'd jump in. I hate it when I go a while without reviews. :) So, ...

Lovely, Ky, just lovely. And I'm not being sarcastic either. The first half of this, when Charlie is arguing with himself over what to do with Amir, is very good. ...

Sorry it took me so long to get to this, Ky. Busy day. Anyway, on to the story. I think you did very well here. I don't really think though ...

Here's my review, Ky. Sorry it took so long, I've been dealing with some stuff and I didn't want my review to be affected by it. But here we go. ...

Hello, bianca. I'll be your reviewer for today. :) My first question is, is the person who the main character is going to meet a boy or girl? At one ...

I didn't exactly want to be awake at this time, but my brother said it was time for a "wake n bake" is what he called it. Put a comma ...

Oh my goodness, this chapter is too short, Ky. :) Anyway, now we are introduced to two new characters. I have to say that I'm already interested as to their ...